Some feedback that
stood out to me as important was the quality of video and the daytime the video
was taken. For this elevator
pitch, I took their advice and did it when it was bright outside. Dressing
professionally was feedback that I received on a few assignments back and it
really does make a difference. I feel that it makes people focus more on the
content of the elevator pitch than what the person is wearing. Nothing was
outright wrong or silly about the feedback I received.
For this elevator
pitch, I did not change anything. The idea is still the same and my massage is
still straight to the point. I keep the idea of being outside and demonstrating
where my product would be most useful.
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