Elevator Pitch No. 3

From the comments I received from the last elevator pitch some things that stood out as important were dressing professionally and working on the delivery of the message itself. These things are important because the way you deliver and present yourself while presenting product to other people could really impact the customer’s decision to buy it. All the feedback I received surprised me because they all mentioned the same thing one way or the other which was to work on the delivery of the pitch. I did not think any feedback was outright wrong or silly. All made very good points and I agree with what they were saying.      

For my last pitch I received positive feedback as well as constructive criticism. For this elevator pitch, I decided to be out in the open where the product I am trying to create would be most useful. I also took into effect some of the things the comments mentioned I should use or improve. I dressed professionally to help me get into character and really feel the part I was trying to convey. I also tried to have a clearer and flowing pitch as compared to the last elevator pitch. I am still sticking to the same elevator pitch I started with because a lot of people think it is unique and find it really useful.